William Gibson, Pattern Recognition
Don De Lillo, Cosmopolis
Bruce Sterling, The Zenith Angle
I've been contemplating a lengthy analytical response to these books for weeks now. (Months, in some cases.) But the pieces I contemplate too long tend not to get written so you'll have to settle for this scattershot one in its place.
The desire to write what's now destined to be unwritten began with my disappointment at The Zenith Angle. It's a toughening-the-geek novel and as such it's reminiscent, to its detriment, of the Randy Waterhouse sections of Neal Stephenson's vastly superior Cryptonomicon. But this toughening-the-geek novel is set in the atmosphere of threatened, affronted masculinity following September 11, and so the geek's toughening is dangerously compliant with the strutting performances of our own once-prodigal commander-in-chief.
The book opens as IT genius Derek Vandeveer smugly surveys the spoils of a middle-class suburban dream he's achieved more by default than desire; he hasn't bothered furnishing his expensive new home, but he does love watching his highly degreed, recently fecund wife make him toast. The September 11 attacks appear to jolt him out of this complacency but they only shake him loose from his dot-com job and into a Homeland Security gig. At heart he still wants desperately to fulfill the most conservative definitions of husband, father, and man, even if it means abandoning his family; he can only conceive these roles by their clichés and he'll follow any script he's given to get them.
This might constitute a timely and acerbic satire if Sterling didn't appear to believe it. Vandeveer might come in for some muted criticism on the domestic front, but politically nothing ever shakes the novel's investment in this narrative or implies its values aren't normative. Other characters and events bend themselves to conform with Vandeveer's impoverished conception of himself: after he returns from his toughening for a day of sex in a millionaire's sleazy hot-tub pad, his wife actually says, "Well, hero, now you know what you were fighting for!"
That's just one of many moments that will briefly convince you you're reading one of those soft-core spy novels written by Newt Gingrich or Bill O'Reilly, but it's not the worst. Even though Sterling is skeptical about any government's ability to enforce global computer security he's extremely quiescent, occasionally outright boosterish, about the government's conduct post-9/11. Donald Rumsfeld comes in for high praise, a not unrealistic stance for geeks to strike any time before, let's say, May of 2003; Rumsfeld's desire to modernize the armed forces would be well in keeping with their technocratic proclivities. That still doesn't explain the rather cuddly portrayal of the Secretary of Defense's notoriously monomaniacal (and, as events continue to show us, tactically inept) managerial style. We are told Rummy "had been ruthless" with Van's boss - by making him go on a regimen of doctor's checkups and "heart-safe exercises." It's nice to know he cares so much about his subordinates' health, assuming they're stationed in the District of Columbia and not the Sunni triangle.
If references to Iraq seem out of place in this review, that's by Sterling's design - to his detriment, since the war in Iraq is the event that nullifies every glowing thing he has to say about the Bush government's security efforts. And, to be fair, it proves many of his critiques, albeit at a terrible cost - but Sterling cheats by avoiding the subject entirely, a ridiculous omission for a novel about national security and government policy that ends in fall 2002. (He does write one scene featuring a spacey antiwar protester, but it's set too early for the Iraq protests and it conveniently avoids mentioning exactly what she's protesting.) It's not a surprising avoidance: Iraq is where the insecure, overcompensating pseudomasculinity craved by Derek Vandeveer and exemplified by George W. Bush both leads and falters, leaving others to pick up the tab.
But Sterling still exalts the architects of that war, even when it or they are too repugnant for him to name. I'm just not going to be able to enjoy a novel that casts "the President's political adviser" as a deus ex machina who descends from the rafters of 1600 Pennsylvania Ave. to punish the bad, non-forward-thinking faction and reward our hero and his bosses. Declining to name Karl Rove only compounds the sin; it means Sterling knows he's exalting a creep, is ashamed of it, and does it anyway.
The novel isn't all to the bad. The Zenith Angle blends contemporary cultural commentary with genre trappings far more successfully than Sterling managed in his last outing, Zeitgeist. The more outlandish elements of the plot are assembled so carefully and so gradually that you almost don't notice he's got a villain with a plot worthy of Ernst Stavro Blofeld - or Chairface Chippendale, for that matter - until he's wheeled out the superweapon. But even after the last curtain is dropped and you realize you've been reading a cheap spy novel that merely postures as a timely cultural critique - well, it's still more entertaining than the metafictional characters leaving Wile E. Coyote holes in walls in Zeitgeist.
Don DeLillo also turns to caricature in Cosmopolis, but more transparently and with more evident satire. It's unquestionably the better book, although not because of the caricature; overdone satire can be just as bad as the invisible, spineless kind. But the novel, in which billionaire Eric Packer tries to cross midtown Manhattan during a day-long traffic jam, is structured as a series of distinct episodes, each one as isolated from the scenes before and after it as the footfalls of Odysseus. Some of these scenes flatly do not work but others are brilliant little biopsies of their cultural moment at the end of the nineties bubble.
I'm partial to the Times Square section, for its portrait of "stunted humans in the shadow of the underwear gods" and for the anticapitalist protest that occasions the novel's best and most exigent observations. As in Underworld, DeLillo's radical street theater group is more organized, more effective, and more sinister than radical street theater has ever been, but the scene works because of the contrast between the violence on the streets and the smug running commentary provided by Packer's pet academic from the provisional safety of his stretch limo. The scene culminates in a passage that John Pistelli argues evokes September 11, even though the novel is set (in bold, sans-serif capitals fit for a Kubrick intertitle) IN THE YEAR 2000.
The contrast with The Zenith Angle and is immediate and telling. Sterling has avoided a topic (Iraq) that undermines his subject; DeLillo writes around one (September 11) that actually complements his, providing as it did the bitter punctuation to the period whose ending began, he would have us believe, on the day his novel is set. Writing at the beginning of the end of the bubble, DeLillo proleptically gives us a glimpse of the end of the end, and it ends in fire.
My favorite passage, however, is probably this more humble observation of the diamond district:
Hasidim walked along the street, younger men in dark suits and important fedoras, faces pale and blank, men who only saw each other, he thought, as they disappeared into storefronts or down the subway steps. He knew the traders and gem cutters were in the back rooms and wondered whether deals were still made in doorways with a handshake and a Yiddish blessing. In the grain of the street he sensed the Lower East Side of the 1920s and the diamond centers of Europe before the second war, Amsterdam and Antwerp. He knew some history. [...] Black men wore signboards and spoke in African murmurs. Cash for gold and diamonds. Rings, coins, pearls, wholesale jewelry, antique jewelry. This was the souk, the shtetl. Here were the hagglers and talebearers, the scrapmongers, the dealers in stray talk. The street was an offense to the truth of the future. But he responded to it.
While the rest of the novel rushes headlong into an uncertain future that purports (falsely, as it will turn out) to have transcended all physical laws, while Eric Packer's cameras show him images of himself before they happen, he's entranced by the diamond district's brazen, retrograde materialism, and I'm entranced along with him. These diagnostic passages are not only intellectually but emotionally engaging in a way the novel's derisive caricatures are not - and if Cosmopolis does not always attain these heights or linger at them for long, it at least allows for this kind of compartmentalized reaction.
Where DeLillo turns all too frequently to caricature to represent the present, and Sterling to Tom Clancy-style techno-thrillers, William Gibson achieves a surprisingly comfortable naturalism without changing his cyberpunk style in the slightest. Of the three attempts to write about the present as science fiction, his is the least arch and, not coincidentally, the most successful.
DeLillo and Gibson have been tending towards one another for some time now, a gradual process that became clear to me during a weekend at Rock Island when I read the decade-old Virtual Light. (Entertaining science fiction, and well-sourced, with more than a nod to Mike Davis.) The first chapter contained this positively DeLilloesque line:
The architects wanted the cinder block walls stripped just this one certain way, mostly gray showing through but some old pink Safeway paint left in the little dips and crannies. [...] He'd overheard one of them explaining to the foreman that what they were doing was exposing the integrity of the material's passage through time. He thought that was probably bullshit, but he sort of liked the sound of it anyway; like what happened to old people on television.
It's not the passage or even the sentence, just the bit of remembered phrase: exposing the integrity of the material's passage through time, with that fine DeLilloan ear for the mundane bullshit of our own conversations, sanded down until it almost regains some sort of dignity.
Cosmopolis has lines like that too, and Pattern Recognition probably has fewer of them, but Gibson holds true to this patient observation of the increasing surreality of modern life while DeLillo runs off to write novels about billionaires with shark tanks and wristwatch cameras. Pattern Recognition doesn't need caricature and generally doesn't force it: Gibson lets the strangeness express itself.
The novel follows Cayce Pollard, a corporate consultant who's hired to track down the auteur of a mysterious sequence of Web-distributed film footage. Her assignment takes her through a world of corporate espionage, deep niche marketing, retro-computing technology fetishists (an old Gibson favorite), washed-up cryptography experts, and vanished ex-spies. The fruits of the new century grow in the ashes of the old, acknowledging the importance (if also the transience) of the past in a way that Eric Packer never could.
The early chapters are discomforting and claustrophobic, focalized all too well through Cayce's jet lag and her strange, double-edged gift, a violent allergic reaction to brands and a knack for apophenia - the ability to perceive, rather than invent, connections between apparently unrelated phenomena. (The novel's apophenic preoccupations suggest that, rather than tending towards one another, Gibson and DeLillo are each from their own obliques approaching Pynchon. This prospect makes me happy.) If the branding allergy is a bit too precious at least it follows its own inscrutable logic and not, say, the authorial fiats of a magical realism that would be at odds with the book's tone.
That tone is the traditional Gibson tone (which has gotten less overtly Chandlerian over the years, but still noirish and elegiac), its plot the traditional Gibson plot, and Cayce Pollard the traditional Gibson protagonist: when a new acquaintance calls her "Case," we know it's not just an in-joke. (I need to reread Count Zero but, working from very faded memories, it seems like there are more than superficial similarities between Cayce's assignment and the Marly Krushkova plotline; similarities, for that matter, between the tragic artists who lie behind each of those plots. That such a comparison could even be possible, given the artists, is itself part of the tragedy.) The suitability of these old formulas to Gibson's newly realistic fiction does not simply confirm that the present has indeed come to resemble one of his novels. It tells us that those novels were built not around the trappings of console cowboys and virtual idols but a sturdy core of hard-boiled fiction; and that both the cyberpunk and the noir elements are exceptionally adaptable to novels about our own era, providing what might be the perfect fusion of plot, mood, and social commentary.
At a conference a few months ago I was struck by how many academics were referencing Neuromancer in their work - often superficially, as sometimes happens when one of us decides to stoop down to deal with the demotic, but just as often with real passion and thought. Gibson is one of those novelists whose work will continue to grow in stature and importance, and Pattern Recognition is a good bid to sustain the process - not because it sheds the cyberpunk elements but because it uses the important ones in new ways to tell an entertaining, perceptive, often moving story. Moreso than the acknowledged literary giant or his old writing partner, Gibson has produced a novel for our times.
I love the phrase "toughening-the-geek": it strikes at the heart of what I find annoying about all these "action" novels with computer-guy/techie heroes.
I thought Pattern Recognition fell short of its promise. It is certainly bizarre for Sterling to write a novel about the Bush administration's response to 9/11 while leaving out the war in Iraq. However, it is even more bizarre to me that Gibson wrote a novel about 9/11 that leaves out Islamic fundamentalism and terrorism.
Posted by: J. W. Hastings | June 01, 2005 at 08:05 AM
See, J.W., I've been trying to write a response to your initial post about Pattern Recognition for months or a year or as long as it's been since you wrote about it because I'm just not convinced I see where the content you want could have gone (or how). The whole book deals with the pressure of absence, if you want to look at it that way, and I don't see why this peculiar silence should be seen as anything other than another instance of that, of the way things loom when they aren't really there. In a way, that's how I think the Gibson cyberpunk heritage fits in, as a shadow of something not really there, or at most off to the side. It's Boone who would be the hacker anti-hero in a more standard story, Cayce as a sleekly unbranded femme fatale of sorts, and the story is much more full and human because it doesn't go in that direction at all.
Since I haven't read the other books and am just talking around the edges of things here, I'll stop, but maybe this will finally push me to either come up with something on my own or give up on the prospect of doing so.
Posted by: Rose | June 01, 2005 at 11:10 AM
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Rose,
I'm not sure where it would've gone/fit either, but it just seems perverse to write a novel about 9/11 where the real threat of globalization is posed by the Russian mob.
I see your point about absence, etc., but, more than anything else, 9/11 brought home the presence of virulently anti-American Islamic fundamentalism--something too many people were unaware of/ignoring/etc. Gibson's point seems to be that the specifics don't really matter, but Marc's point about Sterling's novel was that the specifics do matter.
Posted by: J. W. Hastings | June 01, 2005 at 11:44 AM
I'm not sure Pattern Recognition is a novel about September 11. It's about globalization and the disconnected modes of living it engenders (as well as some new possibilities for connection that otherwise wouldn't exist, seen especially in the surprisingly tender wrap-up). Virulently anti-American Islamic fundamentalism can be seen as a violent reaction against one face of that globalization, but I don't see how that mandates its inclusion any more than the inclusion of, say, virulently nativist anti-global American aggression, also absent from Gibson's novel. The September 11 material is just one manifestation of the novel's larger concerns about the collapse of late-twentieth century, Cold War paradigms and the emergence of new ones, and the confusion as we try to make the transition.
Posted by: Marc | June 01, 2005 at 05:46 PM
Marc,
I think you're being somewhat disingenuous. Pattern Recognition was marketed--by Gibson and his publishers--as a response to 9/11. And I do find it just a tad unseemly that Gibson has taken his standard techno-noir-thriller story and tried to give it more relevance/meaning by setting it in "the shadow of no towers." One of the major subplots in the book is the heroine's attempt to find out what happened to her father, who was one of the WTC terrorists' victims. I mean, he wasn't abducted by aliens...
Posted by: J. W. Hastings | June 01, 2005 at 07:31 PM
Steven just pointed out that we bought a copy of The Zenith Angle a few weeks ago, so I think I'll try to read that tonight. (I wrote this before seeing J.W.'s latest comment, but I'm not changing anything I said even if it isn't really in response to that at all. I've also made several unsuccessful attempts to post and will be appropriately chagrined if they all show up later. This is my last try.)
I'm still hung up on the presence/absence thing because Pattern Recognition isn't about September 11 as much as about Cayse's response to it or movement from it. As far as specifics go, no one from the past is reading this novel. No one right now is reading it without echoes of terrorism and their own experiences and memories and politics playing in the background. My worry about J.W.'s argument has always been that any specificity would seem false. The events of September 11 as a whole remain more a specter than anything more tangible in the story, and I don't see how adding specificity could have helped. Either small allusions would be read as trite and dismissive or there would have been too much exposition given over to something we apparently all realize. I don't see an alternative better than leaving this "in the gutter," so to speak.
But even more is that it's not our story but decidedly Cayse's, and I think that focalization helps. Well, and it doesn't hurt that the charming ending is so much more satisfying to me than any other Gibson ending ever and that it gives the personal storyarc precedence, but I think Cayse is shielding herself from so many of the things surrounding her father's death, from the recordings her mother send to any political analysis that would let her make sense of something she still sees as senseless. She wants something clear and personal and maybe beyond hope, not a pedestrian reality, even though that's what she eventually gets and accepts. I'm not making much of an argument, but I'm still convinced that this emphasis on absence was definitely the right way for Gibson to go for many reasons. But I also think for many reasons this was unlike other Gibson books and not a standard thriller and not a standard anything, which was what made it most satisfying of all.
Posted by: Rose | June 01, 2005 at 07:45 PM
J.W.: I think you're being somewhat disingenuous.
You're free to think so, but I'm not. The Footage; Cayce's jet lag, apophenia, and branding allergies; the various personal relationships she and others maintain almost entirely through e-mail (Damien, Parkaboy, the otaku, etc); her professional assignments as brand evaluator and marketing detective; the repeated masking of professional relationships as personal ones by the deep niche marketer and other characters; and countless other aspects of the novel, comprising its vast majority, have no causal connection to September 11 and everything to do with the book's more predominant themes of global capital and global culture and the alienation and loss they engender. September 11 is not unrelated to these themes, especially with the disappearance of Cayce's father, but it's a subset of them, not the other way around.
Gibson or his publishers may have marketed it as a "9/11 book," but that's the hype and not the book and as such it's about as trustworthy as any Grant Morrison interview. Nor have I personally seen the book marketed that way; looking at the various editions, I see that every single inside cover flap and Publisher's Weekly blurb restricts its September 11 comments to one sentence, always about Cayce and her father. I think that's fairly representative of the novel. The dustjackets are instead filled with quotes about the collapse of the future into the present and glowing reviews christening Gibson "our great poet of crowds" - themes and labels normally reserved for Don DeLillo. So I'd say it's being much more heavily marketed as a DeLillo novel, the SF writer's bid for serious mainstream literature. But I don't think that's unrepresentative of the novel either.
I don't disagree with you about the seemliness of incorporating September 11 as a minor subplot just to lend the novel some somber importance (although that's a massive presumption of intent on our part), though it does at least mesh well with the novel's themes. I'm not sure if it's possible to argue that the 9/11 material is irrelevant to the novel's plot and that it's the major theme of the novel and that Gibson has therefore erred by not addressing its causes.
I don't think that addressing September 11 automatically overwhelms every other aspect of the book and makes it "a novel about 9/11." Gibson defies that assumption, acknowledging the pain and loss the attacks caused without subordinating everything he sees in the world to that day. If anything the novel is filled with reminders, from the Buchenwald calculators to the Russian excavation site, and the story behind the Footage, that no nation, no historical moment, no single day has a monopoly on tragedy.
Posted by: Marc | June 01, 2005 at 10:57 PM
Marc,
Gibson has written a novel where the main character's father was killed by the WTC terrorists, where the mystery surrounding precisely why her father's path intersected with that of the terrorists frames the entire story, and where the rest of the novel is mainly concerned with how she's coped with this loss (by getting involved in the mystery of the Footage). Yet Gibson leaves out any mention of the terrorists or any of the specifics of the actual attack. That's his choice, and I agree with you that it fits into his larger thematic concerns, but I think its a bad choice, kind of like writing a book that used the Holocaust as a framing event but never mentioned the Nazis...
Posted by: J. W. Hastings | June 02, 2005 at 12:33 PM
I disagree that the mystery of Win Pollard's disappearance "frames the entire story." It lurks there for the duration of the novel, but "frames" implies that everything else in the novel is predicated upon or subordinated to it, when more accurately it's the other way around. Gibson is far more concerned with the effects of that loss (and of loss in general) than its causes.
Your Holocaust analogy is pretty apt since Gibson also references it but doesn't have much to say about the Nazis or the specifics of their genocide. Nor does he need to - is it likely that any of his readers don't know the Nazis were the cause of the Holocaust? Or that al Qaeda attacked the World Trade Center? I don't see how mentioning these crimes mandates that the novel say more about the perpetrators.
Going off on a tangent, there's a strange line where Cayce thinks about Voytek "and his calculators from Buchenwald, whatever that was." (Or something to that effect.) I'm not sure how to parse that line - I initially thought it was some badly overplayed commentary about the ignorance and erasure of history, but I'm not sure that's possible as Cayce later makes an informed reference to Nuremberg. So I assume her confusion is about the calculators and not Buchenwald itself. Still, an odd sentence.
Posted by: Marc | June 02, 2005 at 01:02 PM
Marc,
I'm not too interested in wrangling over word choice here, but.... I used the word "frames" because her the mystery of her father's death is brought up at the beginning of the book and then again at the end. Yes, you're right, the mystery really does thread its way through the entire book, but its also the thread that Gibson chooses to close the novel on, so I think it does have a slightly more important place in Gibson's scheme than your allowing for. The rest of the book isn't subordinated to it, but the 9/11 stuff does fuel the novel's thematic engine, which is an awful metaphor, I know. If you look at the beginning and the end of the book, you can see the heroine's major "arc" is that she moves closer to coming to terms with losing her father on 9/11.
And yes, Gibson references the Holocaust, but he didn't write a novel about the daughter of a Holocaust victim, who is driven by that loss to investigate some seemingly unrelated, but thematically similar, mystery. My argument isn't about thematic issues: its about nuts and bolts plot/character issues. No matter how thematically appropriate it might be, it still seems bizarre/wrongheaded to write a novel (1) whose main character is the daughter of a WTC victim and (2) that has a major plot thread devoted to her trying to deal with not knowing the specifics of his death without ever mentioning terrorism.
At this point, I'm tempted to say that what I'm saying about Gibson is pretty similar to what you were saying about Sterling, but I'm sure you have lots of reasons why its a completely different issue. I really don't think it is though: Sterling has set his novel in the real world and is dealing with real world events. Your criticism (which I agree with) is that he presents at best an incomplete picture of these events and at worst a badly skewed one. By leaving out the stuff he doesn't want to deal with (or that doesn't fit his theme), Sterling has written a novel that rings false to you. Likewise, Gibson's novel rings false to me because of what he has left out. I'm not trying to say that you should feel the same way, but arguing that Gibson's choices about the way he deals with 9/11 are organic to the novel's overall thematic structure just isn't going to make those choices seem "right" to me.
This has been fun... Now I've got to go work on my post about why Sin City really is noir...
Posted by: J. W. Hastings | June 02, 2005 at 07:29 PM
One of the things that most forcibly struck me about Pattern Recognition is that Gibson has become one of the best male writers about female characters around. I'd be particularly interested to know what actual women think about this, though.
Posted by: William Burns | June 03, 2005 at 05:56 AM
I guess I can see enough competing (or really, complementary) arcs for Cayce, equally present throughout the novel, that I'm not inclined to elevate September 11 above every other theme or plot element; most of the the ones I mentioned before are equally persistent. I worry that insisting the novel become About 9/11 is just doing as readers what I hope Gibson wasn't doing as a novelist: letting the gravity of the event elevate it beyond its actual prominence in the story.
Nor do I really see much to compare Gibson and Sterling on this point (except in the broadest possible strokes: each one leaves out something one of us wanted them to talk about, but that's really more of a comparison between our reactions than their novels). Gibson does address September 11, just not in the way you wanted him to; Sterling completely avoids Iraq. Moreover, al Qaeda is fairly orthogonal to Gibson's subject matter; Iraq and its consequences are directly relevant to Sterling's, and in fact spring from some of the same personalities whom he exalts for their dedication to national security. (I confess I'm not clear why Sterling setting his novel in the real world clinches the connection to Gibson, except again in the broadest possible terms.)
And I doubt either one of us was going to convince the other to change their mind about Pattern Recognition, but the value of conversations like this tends to be in the opportunity they offer to represent (and hone) our interpretations, not to make converts.
Posted by: Marc | June 03, 2005 at 11:10 AM